37. The Exclamation Point
OPENING MONOLOGUE - (INT. COMEDY CLUB - NIGHT)
JERRY:What's the deal with punctuation? I mean, it's like the traffic signals of language, right? A period is a stop sign. A comma is a yield. But the exclamation point... that's a flashing siren, a car chase, a full-blown linguistic emergency! You use too many, and people think you're unhinged. You use too few, and they think you're dead inside.
SCENE 1: INT. MONK'S DINER - DAY
[Jerry, Elaine, and George are sitting in a booth.]
JERRY: So, I get this email from my health insurance company, right? Subject line: 'Important Information About Your Plan!' Three exclamation points. Three! What could be so important? Did they discover the cure for everything and decide to give it away for free? ELAINE: Maybe they finally realized they've been overcharging you for years! GEORGE: Or maybe they're canceling your plan! That's important! JERRY: Turns out it was just a reminder to get a flu shot. A reminder! With three exclamation points! It's like they're threatening me with good health. ELAINE: So did you get one? JERRY: No! They scared me away from needles with all that excitement!
SCENE 2: INT. JERRY'S APARTMENT - DAY
[Jerry is on the phone. Kramer enters, wearing an overly enthusiastic expression.]
JERRY: (On phone) Yes, I understand the importance of regular dental checkups! One exclamation point is enough! (Hangs up) Kramer, what's with the face? KRAMER: Jerry, I've got it! The perfect business venture! We're gonna be exclamation point consultants! JERRY: Exclamation point consultants? What are you talking about? KRAMER: We'll teach people the proper use of the exclamation point! Businesses, individuals, government agencies – everyone needs our help! JERRY: Kramer, nobody needs an exclamation point consultant. It's a punctuation mark, not a life skill.
SCENE 3: INT. ELAINE'S OFFICE - DAY
[Elaine is at her desk, typing. Her boss, Mr. Lippman, approaches.]
LIPPMAN: Elaine, about this memo… ELAINE: Yes, Mr. Lippman? LIPPMAN: It seems a little… enthusiastic. ELAINE: Enthusiastic? I was just trying to convey the urgency of the situation! LIPPMAN: 'Urgent'? It was a memo about ordering new staplers. Five exclamation points is excessive, Elaine.
SCENE 4: INT. JERRY'S APARTMENT - NIGHT
[Jerry, George, and Elaine are eating pizza.]
GEORGE: My parents sent me an email today. Subject: 'We're Coming to Visit!!!' JERRY: Four exclamation points. They're really excited to see you suffer. ELAINE: Mr. Lippman banned me from using exclamation points. He said they make me look unprofessional. GEORGE: Unprofessional! You should see the emails I get from my mother! It's like a punctuation party in there! JERRY: You know, maybe Kramer's onto something. The world does need exclamation point guidance.
CLOSING MONOLOGUE - (INT. COMEDY CLUB - NIGHT)
JERRY:So, I was at the supermarket today, and I see this sign: 'Fresh Produce!!' Two exclamation points. Is it really that fresh? I mean, is it still growing? Should I bring a shovel? And then, right next to it, another sign: 'Reduced Prices!!!' Three exclamation points! Now I'm confused. Is it fresh, or is it rotting? The exclamation point – it’s a mystery wrapped in an enigma, surrounded by a whole lot of unnecessary excitement.